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Care and Love

As all people were born We were as well born People look down on us A snootiness of deeds Because of who we are Are we not part of the globe? Or We're not necessary in this global? What are we to you? Action speaks louder than voice Your actions stabbed our heart With venomous object A scar in our heart We also have tomorrow, Bright after today indeed! We are HANDICAPPED Some even called us disable We also created by HE We deserve care and love To cure the pains therein Thousand of cash and drugs can not only devour abyss of pain But care and love from you A blissful living.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/31/2015 12:26:00 PM
Wonderful message here. We are all born equal, but are lives and worlds are not, and sets us apart, some are born in a world of poverty and suffering, others wealth and comfort. that is not equal. But God made us al equal, and in an ideal world we should be treated so. only in the new kingdom to come. will we all be equal as God intended. A great write and very thought provoking. Well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:17:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:00:00 AM
"Action do speak louder than voice Your action spike joy of our heart" That's so true! I admire the message of this poem! Well one! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/23/2015 5:44:00 AM
- As flowers need sun, heat and water ..... on human need care and love - A wonderful poem - Thanks, Afolabi ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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