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We Just Come Here and Go - Original By Rabindranath Tagore

We just come here and go And go with the time's flow! We only see things And touch while going And look back crying! Only new bleak hopes Take our life forward! We can see false hopes If we look backward! Broken strength carries endless desires Both bright and dark So broken output is obtained from Do or die work! We sail our broken boat in the sea with goods! Our broken language can't express all moods! Half acquaintance in our hearts! Our half sentence needs more words! In shame and fear our faith is half So we offer only half love!

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Date: 1/25/2012 10:34:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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