We Have Embraced Stardust

The moon inhales a bunch of cosmic dust Making it seem the craters are of rust Unknown is the start of glowing stardust Maybe he’s found his powers that adjust I love the moon and if he surely must He digs in his pocket, showers stardust Nice here on Earth with heaven sent stardust It swirls in the wind, picks up in a gust The moon delivers its pride, not a bust What we have embraced, the love of stardust
Russell Sivey Entrant into Gail Angel Doyle's "Blanket of Stardust" contest 1/11/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/24/2013 3:03:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2013 3:55:00 PM
Great creative work that holds a high honor..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2013 1:59:00 PM
Not only a couplet but a monorhyme. Congratulations Russell. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/23/2013 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Russell! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2013 11:15:00 AM
In the winners list I find this, a delight to read once again....Congrats my poet friend !!
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Date: 1/23/2013 2:25:00 AM
This is lovely Russell , congratulations on your winning spot, well deserved xx
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:02:00 PM
a beautiful poem.. I really want to call this poem the best one out of all of Gail's entry.. Russell, not only do i love the way the sky absorbs the stars into a cosmic dust imagery.. it also gives me the warmth of knowing we seem to exist under all the beauty from the day heavens and night heavens... . Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2013 9:51:00 PM
Glad to see you got into her contest. You chose a good way to incorporate that star dust, linking it with the moon.
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Date: 1/11/2013 4:21:00 PM
So now we know where stardust came from !! I really enjoyed reading this and it's a fine entry for the contest. It flows well and I do like couplets !!
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Date: 1/11/2013 3:44:00 PM
I enjoyed your write this evening. The moon is an endless source of verse. Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2013 8:16:00 AM
Nicely written and good luck in the contest. love phyl
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