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We Dance, Misunderstood

What “ matters” matter? the why of things, the how? If I spoke in an enlightened manner, would you be convinced of my meaning? Women cry out like children, Stomping feet. Misunderstood. Belly dancing around issues. Men stand stoic, offering the smile, a grain of stock. Women die inside for this look. Approval, conscript. The moon causes a lunar reaction on the surface of the ocean. Creating movement of water so vast; it destroys a population. Reset. Noah's Ark. If lunar is to the Moon, as waves are to the ocean, How do two items suffering such distance quarrel to draw each other close? Correlation. We dance We dance We dance. Never loving and loving only the act. Spreading pathosis. Nestling each other in the night. Distilling tears on pillow cases that smell unsoiled. Familial divisions, obscured children, betrayals. Drawing close like lovers, absent the love. Vulnerable, unavailable. It was said by a wise man that all brave individuals Have enemies. Those with minimal ego offend. Smug. Are we brave or smug? Divested with strangers we cry in the night, Choosing to walk the week alone. Friday night lights. “Independent” is a buzzword. An improper sort of adjective because I need and want you all at once, One no more than the other. Women love like water while men lay beside us, Watching us sleep, Immersed in the universe. Capable and incapable.

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Date: 12/20/2016 3:44:00 PM
Jaime Billiel,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jaime Billiel
Date: 12/22/2016 3:47:00 PM
i dont know if i could lol.

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