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Water, Sun, Cloud

Water Water flowing down babbling, full of joyfulness giving life to all Sun Soul of life are you blazing ball of sparking fire lighting up our world Clouds Gentle clouds drift by casting shadows over all blanking out the sun written 08/21/2013

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Skat A

Date: 8/21/2013 2:14:00 PM

the sun reflects the way it should on the second one... love all 3.... SKAT

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2013 4:11:00 PM

ty Skat most encouraging Shadow x smile

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 8/21/2013 1:37:00 AM

I especially liked the 1st and 3rd one. Nice try!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2013 4:12:00 PM

hi Vassilis ty for visiting and enjoy my works Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2013 1:08:00 AM

very nice, Sweetie! WAs it for any contest? Not that it has to be. Was just curious!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2013 4:14:00 PM

no just a write lol maybe one day. Ty Andrea for your time reading Shadow x smile

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/20/2013 10:21:00 PM

Love the visuals. very descriptive

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2013 4:16:00 PM

Hi Pj Haiku's are a word painting I always think ty for encouraging remarks Shadow x smile

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/20/2013 7:04:00 PM

Nice. The joy of nature is a magnificent delight.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2013 4:17:00 PM

yes it is Christine and never the same always something new Shadow x smile