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Was I Dreaming - One In Three Contest

It's the bewitching hour the time when dreams are created. I am walking along a dusty path mists  swirling about me Something caught my eye was a deer limping badly.  I softly spoke to him, "don't be afraid",  " I wont hurt you, I will help you" Removed a large thorn from his hoof. He nudged my face as in thanks then walked away looking backwards as though he was remembering Was I dreaming am I awake The thunder and lightening crashed  outside Did it awaken me? Was then I noticed a thorn and a big leaf, on my bed. Contest:  one in three Topic : Beyond Midnight  Dated 27 July 2013

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Date: 8/9/2013 1:32:00 AM
Damn i messed this one up, put wrong title on it. Ahh well silly me.
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Date: 7/28/2013 3:49:00 AM
This was lovely to read Seren.I liked this one from you.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/28/2013 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Mustapha ....Seren
Date: 7/27/2013 4:22:00 PM
good luck yourself
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/27/2013 7:52:00 PM
Thx Richard
Date: 7/26/2013 9:25:00 AM
Incredible tone in this piece. Very, very well done!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 2:41:00 PM
thanks Drake, wasnt too sure of it....Seren
Date: 7/26/2013 5:56:00 AM
Oh I have always enjoyed this story and you have told it so excellently my friend! I really enjoyed reading this majestic write Seren, what a lovely poem that I have read this morning! What a grand piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 2:42:00 PM
Hi Russell, ant wait to read your entry...Seren
Date: 7/26/2013 4:13:00 AM
Seren so lovely and excellent flow Shadow x smiles
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Shadow ...Seren

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