Home » Poems » Seren Roberts » Was I Dreaming - Titles Contest

Was I Dreaming - Titles Contest

"Last night i dreamt" I watched the "dancing clouds" As "I walk the shore" it was an "unbelievable journey" Full of "Many splendours", "a perfect "Summer's Day" A "murmuration "of birds put on "a wonderful show" Then "rain"just like "spring showers" I realised I was " no longer alone", "walk with me" I said He answered with a "smouldering look" Full of "thoughtful emotion" I felt "naked and unadorned" I then realised "that the flame has now gone out" I said "sorry" as i walked away He now "walks alone" "whilst I sit and cry" "was i dreaming" Dated 17 August 2013

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Wayland Bunch

Date: 8/28/2013 7:19:00 PM

Nice dark poem. I really shouldn't like these so much, but I guess it's just being able to relate. Its hard knowing that there is no going back. For whatever the reason, and letting go seems even harder. I guess I'm talking about my poem again lol, the one I didn't write here, Great work Seren.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/20/2013 8:29:00 AM

Wonderful way to weave titles into a beautifully flowing poem

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 9:34:00 AM

Hans. Monterey .... Seren

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/19/2013 9:42:00 AM

I have been away for awhile.Its good to finally be able to catch back up on some of your work my friend.A fine write.Good luck in the contest.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 9:35:00 AM

Hello Mustapha, nice to see you again .....Seren

Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/18/2013 6:35:00 AM

Dreaming or not.. an excellent write. Good luck for the competition.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2013 8:30:00 AM

Thank you Kim, thank goodness for versatile titles to my poems lol ...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2013 5:26:00 AM

Wow, you have amazed me by the immensity of your talents by producing such a grand poem such as this my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful write here this morning! What a glorious piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!