Warning

The other day I was in the shopping mall, just like humpty dumpty I had a great fall. I had to go real bad,I ran past the sign, I hurt like hell and I just sat and whined All because I didn't read that darn sign: CAUTION WET FLOOR Thank goodness I don't have to pay a fine. (Tell that to my aching bones). 10-15-16 Contest: Warnings Sponsor: Viv Wigley

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Augustus Black

Date: 11/9/2016 2:44:00 AM

Hi. Alexis - I like your writing style here. That kind of stuffs happens in life. Nice Couplet. I'm sorry for being not there for catching you.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/9/2016 2:53:00 AM

It's ok it's the thought that counts:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/1/2016 7:30:00 AM

Funny as all outdoors, yet very honestly expressed. A delightful poem, my dear. Love you always. RW

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/20/2016 2:37:00 PM

Good poem I've not thought of a good one yet x I'm always slipping x It spoke to me x

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/19/2016 4:36:00 PM

:-) Your inner limericist survived//and is very much alive//I'm so glad//coulda been bad//remember, writing lim'riks revives! ps. thanks for the warning;-)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/22/2016 1:05:00 AM

Hi John, That's a good limerick. You were your name proud Oh "Limerick King" I appreciate that you visited me. PS, it was my pleasure to give you such a warning.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/17/2016 11:33:00 AM

Ouch!--and a 7, Alexis! Janice

Joseph May

Date: 10/15/2016 6:08:00 PM

Nice write Alexis...hope you're Ok....

Tim Smith

Date: 10/15/2016 4:36:00 PM

I know a good lawyer... seriously I hope you are alright

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/15/2016 3:29:00 PM

Oh Dear....I hope your aching bones mend soon, sweetie. This was a light hearted write...though not so funny for the achy body parts. Thanks for your recent visit to my poem. Sending hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/15/2016 12:39:00 PM

LOL thanks for the smile! :) I do hope you are ok!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2016 12:30:00 PM

- Careful ...... it's painful ....and it's embarrassing - GL in the cotest, Alexis - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2016 12:16:00 PM

OUCH! great warning Alexis:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx