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War Should Be Over!

Pardon, Oh, yeah... No, thanks... Are you crying? bang...bang...bang LOL.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/19/2009 5:16:00 PM

ok? how is this a haiku? I'm just trying to learn. Light & Love email me

Sue Mason

Date: 3/18/2009 10:46:00 AM

Wonderful title here, Tavip!! The form is more Free Verse than Haiku. A Haiku is 3 lines of Line 1=5 syllables, Line 2=7 syllables, Line 3=5 syllables and is usually written about nature. There are examples in the left column on your screen under "Resources". PoetrySoup is a great place to learn so many different forms and can be a lot of fun!! I look forward to reading much more from you!!