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War… By Dane Smith-Johnsen War is good for greed. Hatred! Repugnance. And death… It reinstates need.

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Namratha H

Date: 9/24/2012 4:48:00 AM

Short and sweet.....nice poem

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/8/2009 7:20:00 AM

Bravo to you for this powerful write. Thanks for your comment my friend. And apologies to you, I am nowhere right now...it is devastating watching your pet die. I know you understand. Much love, Shar xoxoxo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2009 10:55:00 PM

War is all of these things. Such a travesty. Excellent write, Dane! Love, Carolyn

Date: 7/19/2009 11:49:00 AM

You make your point in a powerful and concise way in this poem. Too bad the world just can't seem to live in peace. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/19/2009 10:13:00 AM

great write! DAS-J! and thanks for warm comments! jim

John Freeman

Date: 7/19/2009 9:53:00 AM

I needed to re-read, to receive the seed, thanks for commenting, Love moses!

John Freeman

Date: 7/15/2009 3:29:00 PM

Bravo, this surely isn't slow! Take your bow, you've shown us how! Ha,Ha! Godly love jm

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/14/2009 6:40:00 PM

straight to the point---charma

James Peranteau

Date: 7/14/2009 4:26:00 PM

P.P.S,....although,..my writes are my writes ! *smiles* james

James Peranteau

Date: 7/14/2009 4:25:00 PM

Fantastic Haiku Dane,...so intact are its foundry of words here !!!! james ps,...Dane,..my poetry"Compensated with digits",..its a riddle,...souls have not figured it out yet,..it is not perverse in any way ,...*smiles*,..I have great respect for you ! james

James Fraser

Date: 7/13/2009 1:41:00 PM

True words Dane, well said>>James

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/13/2009 7:42:00 AM

Well thought out haiku and the message is very strong my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2009 6:42:00 AM

Great thoughts behind this Haiku. Sara