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Walks-With-Sorrow

The sun sinks low within the sky as does his heart For from his own true love he knows that he must part Walks-With-Sorrow plays a song of lasting grace To shield him from the tears cascading down his face The silence of these woods brings him a sense of calm And with his song he finds himself a healing balm Way off in the distance there's a bride-to-be With watchful eye just waiting for her man to see The beauty and the ecstasy their union brings Unaware of his decision she still sings Songs of wonderment and glory she will carry For today she gives herself to him to marry But Walks-With-Sorrow knows that they can never wed They will not be together in their marriage bed Warring families forced them to keep their love hid Passion for each other tribe elders forbid So now he calls upon the skies to the Great Spirit In the distance his bride cries but he can't hear it Walks-With-Sorrow is a man so filled with pain He'll never leave these woods or ever love again By Deb Wilson for contest"Tell HIS Story" sponsored by Constance La France~A Rambling Poet~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/22/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Constance, Deb
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:33:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top, Deb. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fifth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Deb in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:01:00 AM
Deb, Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:46:00 AM
Very tocuhing story, Deb. Many congrat's on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:08:00 AM
Congrats on the winning entry Deb, in the contest.
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Date: 3/21/2011 11:43:00 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win,deb :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:21:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Tell His Story luv.. for this stunning story so beautiful.. enjoy another top ten success luv..
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations for this winner Deb. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2011 10:52:00 PM
oh,my you went with tragedy. This one has an excellent title to go with this sad feeling topic. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/13/2011 8:30:00 PM
If Constance likes this, then I like it as well. Great ensemble of rhyming couplets.
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:35:00 PM
Wow Deb, This is such a beautiful tragedy of forbidden love. Your words tell such a graphic story. The imagery is amazing. Good luck honey; reads like a winner to me... Luv Lay
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:59:00 PM
A great job you have done here Deb. Good luck in the contest though I doubt you will need luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:59:00 PM
Nice take on the image Deb. Your story would have rung true so many time as the tribes bartered all those centuries ago. Good luck in Constance's contest....:)
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:27:00 PM
Sorry Deb! i have been responding to you after half a day in hospital waiting rooms sorry to get names mixed up, joe.
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:23:00 PM
Great write here Linda-Marie, very discriptive, and sentient. All the best in the contest.
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:00:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Deb, I like the way you were inspired by the image~~
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:58:00 AM
such a unique story you painted here, deb.. . this touched me with your languid images and style... winning luck to you!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:30:00 AM
A strong write on this powerful image.. I would like to wish you the best in the contest with this gem...luv Michael
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:21:00 AM
VERY, very nice interpretation of the picture, Deb. Walks with Sorrow's story reminds me of the song about Running Bear and Little White Dove as well as Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. Star-crossed lovers. A great entry for Constance's contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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