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Walking Flowers....

Her scented perfume another flower with toes, as I bend to breeze....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 9:38:00 PM

congrats in advancing in the soup contest with your senryu!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2011 1:54:00 PM

So romantic a work.Congratulations on coming through first round..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The very best to you in the finals Jay. Love Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/6/2011 6:50:00 PM

Well done, Jay! Congrats on being selected in the Poetry soup Nov. 22, 2010 contest! Caroline.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/23/2011 10:45:00 AM

Nice ballet. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2011 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Jay. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/21/2011 9:33:00 AM

Congrats Jay on the feature. Vince

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/23/2009 9:21:00 AM

hmmmmm... :), ya know I didn't comment on this one before, you know I absolutely love this one, I put it in my favs after I talked to you and u posted this one. I am really glad you got the recognition u did with it. It is very well conveyed, and u will always b a bit mysterious to me because of my own personal take on things,but that's OK :) Lots of love always, Lucinda

Sue Mason

Date: 9/18/2008 11:34:00 AM

Awesome, incredible write as always Jay !! Congratulations on simplicity at its most elegant and to the PoetrySoup reviewers who recognize such talent.

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/15/2008 7:03:00 AM

Congrats dearest Jay on a most well deserved featured write. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/15/2008 6:17:00 AM

Jay congrats on having your poem featured this week

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/15/2008 5:34:00 AM

Hey!! Congratulations Jay on "Walking Flowers" being featured. God Bless. Vince

Date: 9/13/2008 5:56:00 PM

What a nice thought. Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. It is a day brightener. Keep on writing. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/12/2008 7:55:00 PM

Thats right Jay - Very cleaver indeed - I want to thank you for your comment Jay regarding my blog - Means a lot to me - Words I'll never forget - God Bless you my friend

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/12/2008 7:51:00 AM

A very delightful and clever poem. Simply love it. Regards Heidie

Farah Chamma

Date: 9/12/2008 4:59:00 AM

A wonderful Senryu Jay...The imagery is great...Thank you for sharing.. TYOne, Farah

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/10/2008 4:06:00 PM

Jay, this is quite clever. Love your play on words in the last line. Love, Shar