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Walking Away - For Contest

WALKING AWAY – for contest Velcro attachments tear at my heart fibers ripping individually, separating without knowledge without cause ….tortured by the pain of reason’s doubt w a l k I n g ……….. a w a y 12/14/2015 submitted to – Walking Away – poetry contest sponsor – Silent One

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Date: 12/17/2015 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John! I am very fascinated with your form :)
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John Lawless
Date: 12/18/2015 3:24:00 PM
Eve, the form - or at least the set-up of the lines - is an attempt to convey the tearing and separation - the doubt....the walking away.
Date: 12/17/2015 3:29:00 PM
JOHN, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 12/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thanks SKAT....
Date: 12/16/2015 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win John.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Robert
Date: 12/15/2015 7:06:00 AM
John, great format.. =`) powerfully delivered.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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John Lawless
Date: 12/16/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Olive, I just played a little bit with the spacing to accent the separation of walking away...
Date: 12/14/2015 3:42:00 PM
Wow! I like the word descriptions B-) shining bright had to wear my sunglasses!!!!!!! 11+
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John Lawless
Date: 12/16/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thanks for your high praise and high mark Eve..
Date: 12/14/2015 3:19:00 PM
WOW You will walk away a winner with this creative write John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 12/14/2015 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Jan....I wrote a couple on this theme ... submitted this one to the contest

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