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Waiting Room at the Hospital

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Waiting Room at the Hospital

Pantheon of obtuse glorifications
Hallways confetti bile stymied soldiers smile
Waves and waves of the nation's slaves
Wave your flag
The few 
The proud
The crippled and the dead

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  1. Date: 5/28/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Very strong message here! You've used few words for maximum impact! Thanks for your visits.

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Sara

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 9:20:00 AM
    Wow! "Waves and waves of the nation's slaves" - well put. You have crafted an intense piece with this one. Great job!

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:55:00 PM
    Powerful view of the plight of our heros. Well done

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Dang! This is a powerful piece- I'm impressed! Very inspiring. :) Well done!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:04:00 PM
    Another bone-grinding good write.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:24:00 AM
    There's a lot of intensity packed into these few lines, a condensation of emotion. Well written... Jack

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Very strong, emotional work, Kirin, very sad.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 6:20:00 AM
    I really enjoy reading your pieces. You have a talent. This poem was outstanding and strong. Can't wait to read more :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:43:00 PM
    The VA hospital, no doubt. Loved this expression you've put into poetry. hugs, catie :)