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Waiting For Your Tenderly Touch....

WAITING FOR YOUR TENDERLY TOUCH...... Here i was mother within you, feeling the warmth of your womb.... i tried to touch your soul within, & made you cry even. i kicked you to pain, and wriggled in without any shame.... You saved me from every bad things, and i enjoyed every bit of it within. The moment you touched your womb, knowing that u are touching me, was the most desirable feeling, as i knew that u were there to love me.... Indeed i now feel so sad, why mother????? why did you show me the world, even after knowing that it was so bad. U kept me safe within you, n i was not frightened ever. but now i feel scared mother, by seeing dose eyes full of terror. Now since iv grown mother, i can understand the worldly pains.... u brought me in this world happily, but look mother your effort's all in vane. m in the midst of this crowd, were people are ready to kill. and here i miss your tenderly touch...... i don't have you by my side mother, there are bullets crossing ma head. what have i done to them... i think, why do they want my blood to be shed. i miss you mother sincerely, and miss your tenderly touch.... i promise mother i'll be good to everyone, i promise that i'll not trouble you. please make them stop mother, they are making me scared , the sound of bullets are scaring me, i fear that i wont be able to return back to you.... come mother come... free me from these scary people, i'm bleeding n full of wound.... give me that tenderly touch.. the warmth which i got in your womb.......

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Date: 3/24/2011 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured , Caroline
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Date: 3/21/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:37:00 PM
Great work and welcome to poetry soup, where you are amongst great company. I invite you to read some of my work...Raul
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:53:00 AM
Wow this is beautiful, wonderful job, welcome to the soup! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:27:00 AM
Good poem and welcome to poetry soup you will love it here and and you are very good at writing poems.......................Danielle
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