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[ a nette onclaud collab ] As twilight moves through the glass of dawn I catch my shadow hiding among trees, like ripped gauze from a withering leaf, that slips into the brazen darkness weary from cracks of brittle tears, alone once more looking for souls who are not there ... and I weep for unfinished dreams upon a mute moon, while begging for fate’s new postscript to hurl the way, a different song this time. Unfinished vows left behind, on this night, I cast light from the sterilized room, matching shadows throughout the twilight something of dreams creeps below the pillow searching for peace and serenity numbers become numb I can't breathe, knowing I'm incomplete, trite tears longing to be together lyrics become darkness, the sun makes laughter once more leaving a plume of dreams above the sheets. A Poet Destroyer Collaboration .......... Contest: Collaboration Celebration Sponsor: Poet Destroyer

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Date: 9/6/2015 5:28:00 AM
This is an excellent collaboration you've penned with our dearest poet and friend Linda my very dear friend, Nette! I love it sooo much and enjoyed the read. A super duper 7 from me and also a fave. Sweet Congratulations to you! Huge hugs and cheers! Btw, how are you? I'm so sorry the other day, I tried my best to decode your voice but I really can't, crackling sounds interfered. I'll try to call you again soon, ok. Have a blessed Sunday! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 9/4/2015 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on the creation of this inspiring poem. Another great and artistic collaboration my friends..
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Date: 9/3/2015 11:42:00 AM
Hi Nette! So pleased to be back reading this lovely collaboration! Congratulations on a most deserved win! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:02:00 AM
Hey Nette, congratulations to you on your big win in Linda's amazing contest! This is a beautifully written collaboration from you both and well deserving. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:34:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win. You and PD penned a good collab:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/2/2015 11:41:00 PM
Nette, BIG congratulations on your wonderful win! An absolutely brilliant work of art with collaboration with Linda Well done. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/2/2015 11:01:00 PM
Congrats nette for a deserved big win with this very beautiful collaboration with Linda!
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:27:00 PM
this one blended really well. BIG congrats to you, Nette.
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Date: 9/2/2015 5:39:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:42:00 PM
An awesome collaboration Nette and Linda my congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:09:00 PM
Hello Nette,, Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:03:00 PM
Nette, a beautiful and seamless write so beautifully penned by two beautiful poets, an amazing 7 and thanks for visiting my randomling poem
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Date: 8/10/2015 3:54:00 PM
A well written collaboration, Nette and Linda! Your words don't direct, they guide the reader to your level of enlightenment with such skill that we treasure each step of the journey. Emile.
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Date: 8/10/2015 3:37:00 PM
A remarkable collaboration, Nette and Linda! Lovely in expression and sad in content...waiting for unfinished dreams. #7 hugs // paul
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Date: 8/10/2015 11:30:00 AM
Awe struck by the depth and melody of this poem. I see here a TWO craftswomen weaving imprints together in a very haunting way. Your voices are immensely powerful!
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Date: 8/10/2015 11:17:00 AM
I'm in this " lost for words' moment. This pensive poem is beautifully bleak and somewhat soothing .You and PD Linda really mesh well together!
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Date: 8/10/2015 11:08:00 AM
- I think it's the first collab I've read from you Nette :) - Really wonderful written from both of you - I wish you good luck in the contest - (Please read my blog) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/10/2015 4:56:00 AM
Awesome collab of two admired poets on this site. A perfect blending of your thoughts and words on this poignant write, Nette and Linda. congrats! hugs
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