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Waiting for poetrysoup-dot-com Spinning wheel’s hamsters – my brain goes numb Will my comment be posted Before my vision’s toasted Please just wake me up when it is done Sometimes I read and spend half my day Hoping each comment will soon display To return comments, I try Slowly, a minute goes by Raise the speed before I drift away If your time is precious to you too There must be something else you can do Take a walk; check when you’re back Hamsters may have left their track If there’s an error page, start anew

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Date: 10/11/2014 2:27:00 PM
A good poem is a balanced food for soul. Fast poem is right for obesity.A slow poem is good for gossip. You can serve the best alphabet soup. So....Good Luck
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Date: 8/18/2014 11:37:00 PM
You are truly one of my all time limerick writers, Carolyn! You can make a masterpiece write over the simplest of topics...stopping by to say HOWDY and hope you are strong and healthy!
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:23:00 AM
Hi Carolyn! I love these limericks, even more because I can relate to them:) Comments and replies are appreciated from both sides, but they often take ages to go through, then the process becomes so time-consuming...and frustrating:)) cu and take care. // paul
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Date: 6/7/2014 5:03:00 PM
LOL, yes, I know exactly how you feel, love
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