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Waiting For a Ship To Come In....

Hair caressing my face as if a lovers’ touch glare jolting iris A lighthouse forever broadcasting the warning debris flying above vortex vibrant glory rubbish has its beauty Steady watching and waiting a galleon its cargo of great worth Westerly gale howling against a hunters moon behemoth of the ocean crashing against the shore ghost voices on the wind lost ships living in the gale forever screaming rope be cast heave ho night after night waiting for a ship A westerly wind carrying fulfillment A precious cargo …. A dream that one day a ship might just come in ….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/22/2009 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Jayne. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 4:49:00 PM
I want that ship. Awesome write. Congrats on being featured this week. This is a well deserved honor. Have a blessed holiday season.
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Date: 12/21/2009 1:04:00 PM
amazing work of art...
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jayne, Merry Christmas to you >> James,xx
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Date: 12/21/2009 5:20:00 AM
A tremendous poem with a lot of heart, very thought provoking poem, congratulations on it being featured
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Date: 5/23/2009 10:10:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 5/21/2009 12:22:00 PM
excellent imagery! Light & Love
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