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~ WHEN ~ (The Mirrored Poem) Remember that God will always be there for you When everything goes bad When the world drives you mad When your hopes and dreams go wrong He'll help you be strong When with life you can't cope He'll give you love hope comfort and His peace When you struggle for what seems in vain He'll take away somehow your pain When you're feeling sad and low His love for you in some ways will show When troubles just pile high and higher Just remember to God just go today Before Him then just kneel and pray He always listens because He's always there with you. He always listens because He's always there with you Before Him then just kneel and pray Just remember to God just go today When troubles just pile high and higher His love for you in some ways will show When you're feeling sad and low He'll take away somehow your pain When you struggle for what it seems in vain He'll give you love hope comfort and His peace When with life you can't cope He'll help you be strong When your hopes and dreams go wrong When the world drives you mad When everything goes bad Remember that God will always be there for you. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013 July.18.2016 -I have said these things to you, that in me you may have peace. In the world you will have tribulation. But take heart; I have overcome the world.” John 16:33 (ESV)

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Date: 7/18/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thank you D for the poem. Love. God bless.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/20/2016 11:59:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly, Rajat ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D
Date: 7/18/2016 9:54:00 AM
Interesting form, but I like this poem. I once wrote a poem made of all the titles of my poems...
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/20/2016 11:59:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly, Frankii ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

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