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Vowel- consonant- contest

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Vowel- consonant- contest

Aboard the event train I watched over the undulating scenery ahead. 
Whose eyes see into shadows ogling the unknown
What a basically exhilarating time indeed.

What other panorama undresses before admiring glances.
Evening skies in many orangey shades urges many admirers
Watching every hue interact with others made us very aware therefore, 
every minute interaction could overflow senses 

Unusually patient artists, wait excitedly for inspiration, no over worried urges,

Mountains alongside roll engagingly by in magnificence, only surprisingly usurped by
angry rivers each with instinct, rushing onwards gleamingly unspoilt, the awaiting sea empty, the incoming tide  overrides the unsuspecting rivers as the eddys flow 
incorporating ocean ,  rivers, united

Fields angrily shout every colour in the oscillating spectrum, urgently needing 
attention, waiting easels placed in readiness,  overtone to undertones
Pencils are flamboyantly enjoying the interesting light overtly sketching, unruffled
Watercolours are readily endorsing the intense flooding on the unadorned paper,
all mingling, each colour interacting with others there upon  

This artist charity event contest, it will occur yearly.  unknown charities,
annually benefitting, every painter indicated his offer to use


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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:43:00 PM
    another good one, you are getting very good at free verse twinkle xx

    Date: 3/20/2013 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Mandy didnt see this before, Thanks Hun ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Nicely done, Seren! Great use of language (thanks for the new word: ogling). Ruben.

    Date: 3/12/2013 7:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HaHa didnt you know that word already lol thought that was what the O after Ruben meant Ruben the Ogler lol i am laughing here.....Seren
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:36:00 PM
    this is awesome Seren...... well wishes...

    Date: 3/12/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joseph....Seren
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 5:06:00 PM
    This is a unique and wondrous write my friend! I am impressed with your versatility with this poem! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!