Vow

When faith decides to bring you love Flown on the wings of a dove When you look into each others eyes You see the sun, moon and skies Love endures it never dies Love comes from deep in the heart Two souls joined together, never apart When faith decides to bring you love Flown on the wings of a dove When you walk down the highway of life Joined together as husband and wife A place where destiny joined your hands As you place these wedding bands. 9/26/12

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 2:44:00 PM

well, I quickly saw you did the clerihew contest but I can't peek at it since I am judging!! I have not seen one clerihew in my contest yet. So all the titles leave my mind by the time I get ready to judge. I so enjoy not knowing my winners until the last minute! Hope you are doing well, my friend. Luv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 10/2/2012 12:43:00 PM

Sounds like a happy, old, married person to me. Love, daver

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/1/2012 2:53:00 PM

enjoyed reading today....how is the grandboy?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2012 10:03:00 PM

sorry, for sharing that piece of poem with you..I was just amazed, on how I wrote mine as a joke, ,, and you did not,, and we both kind of had the same thought... another big wow!!!!! PD

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/29/2012 9:29:00 AM

I clicked on submit so see my poem again.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/29/2012 9:28:00 AM

I know that love and dove are two over used words in poetry. I feel that weddings are about love and dove seems to be the main bird used in wedding pictures. Therefore I used both and who cares what is overused after all it is my poem, my thoughts.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2012 10:01:00 PM

I have a key kite…~~~ Do you want to hold it tight?~~~ It comes in the color purple…~~~ Sent from the wings of an angle, ~~~ Love is always heaven sent…~~~ Like a dove carved from cement…~~~~ (((let me skip some lines))) ~~~A spooky air balloon, awaiting flight … Under the midday light….~~~ The sound of doves, are reaching the ~~~promise land…~~~ Across the sky of love, two hearts circle the sand…~~~~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2012 10:00:00 PM

Phyllis, I was sad to read on a blog, about force rhymes, ~ something about love and dove were mentioned by a poet. how they are forced. I actually think they go together perfectly... I love your poem above. wow... and you should read the poem, i wrote ,, can i share a verse with you here on this page. ~~~~~ hold on.....

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/29/2012 9:30:00 AM

You had me smiling with clips of your poem now will go and read it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/28/2012 9:30:00 PM

WOW PHYL AN AWESOME WRITE OF SHEER DELIGHT FOR A NEWLY MARRIED COUPLE .. WINNING WISHES AS THIS ONE IS FABULOUS MY FRIEND ..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/28/2012 2:42:00 PM

So glad you got to stop by for a bit of R & R! You take care of YOU..I am glad things are looking up for you and yours! Light & Love Always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2012 2:29:00 PM

This is a really sweet poem, dear lady, and I want to thank you so much for viewing so many of my poems. Meanwhile, I am scrambling here to just leave comments to a few of my friends today. You are my last. I have to go soon with my hubbie to a dr. appt. His asthma is acting up and he is on his way home right now from S.L. Much to do, wish I had time to search for some oldies of yours. I truly think I have seen every one of your poems!! Have a lovely weekend my friend. Luv, Andrea