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vomit......

......dribbles down my chin
a fight against vodka.....
.....i didnt win

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  1. Date: 5/23/2014 6:54:00 PM
    mmm vodka...PD

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 3:18:00 PM
    Hello really enjoyed this poetry today and also will read more... Hope you will enjoy my poem/ story: Criminal-- part2 have a great day

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 1:34:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 8:13:00 PM
    Very interesting and meaningful.

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 7:00:00 AM
    wow!!!Daniel,,,been there done that than i grew up,,..lol....nope i have not grwn up yet,,,enjoyed it,,, did you check out my Danny Boy #2 or did you give up,,,if not place nice,,,how about a game of jump rope,,,..lol..Sidney LeeAnn

  1. Date: 6/30/2010 5:21:00 PM
    gross...please don't share with us! LOL

  1. Date: 6/30/2010 2:44:00 PM
    The mistake of the linesman, and also the referee, is inexplicable....everybody saw the ball inside the net. If you drink ...don't drive. I hope you're for Argentina, now.... You should cheer for us against Germany on Saturday. : )Ruben

  1. Date: 6/30/2010 1:56:00 PM
    Yes! I am a sucker for vomit in poetry! Super excellent!!~Chris

  1. Date: 6/30/2010 12:37:00 PM
    That's too funny, I think I've lost that battle a couple of times!~Tirzah~