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The add said," Need model, eight hours, no nudes No mention anywhere about bringing toe shoes I should've taken a moment to pin up my bangs These artists must be thinking I look rather strange It would've been easier in a different pose They draw so slowly and I feel quite exposed These cramps in my toes are really starting to ache Now I'm wondering how long before I get a break The man said five hundred dollars is what the job pays Which is good because I won't be walking for days by Daniel Turner

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Date: 3/20/2016 10:16:00 AM
Anytime Daniel... Hope you are well. Linda
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/20/2016 10:17:00 AM
Check out my last poem and get yourself a smile:):) Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/20/2016 12:58:00 AM
Hi Daniel, Congrats on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~ :)
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate the flowers. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/20/2016 12:53:00 AM
You're too hard to beat! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/17/2016 4:06:00 AM
Congrats Daniel, for that awesome poem's WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/17/2016 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy. I appreciate you kindness and your friendship. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/16/2016 11:13:00 PM
Wonderful write n win Daniel.. big congrats!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you, Upma. I appreciate your friendship. You are always so kind and supportive. Have a great evening Doc and Peace:):)
Date: 3/16/2016 6:03:00 PM
Well done on this one, Danny. Congrats.
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Date: 3/16/2016 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Peaches. I really am happy to see your smiling photo:):) Hope you are well. Peace my dear friend:)
Date: 3/16/2016 4:46:00 PM
DT, many congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/16/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your friendly visits and your kind comments. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/16/2016 2:59:00 PM
I like your take on this, Daniel! Congrats on being on the winner's list! Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/16/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, Ms. Sandra. It's the first I've heard about it. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship. The flowers are beautiful:):)
Date: 3/2/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Ms. Sun. I wasn't really aimimg for humor it just turned out that way. I appreciate your kindness as always. Mahalo:)
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Date: 3/2/2016 12:13:00 PM
:-) :-) The humor oozes!!! May you have many more $500 days!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/2/2016 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Walter my friend. Just keep smiling:)

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