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Just sitting, I'm knitting, dreaming as fan blades idle slowly with an incoming wind. The hands circle the clock marking the passage of time into soundless history. It is late, almost eight, a nurse appears at the door - "Time to leave pretty soon." My hands cradle his face as I kiss the salty brow of his altered memory. Tears flowing, I'm going; our eyes meet and we soul mates sing a hymn together. The dream is understood by musician and poet. Rhythm has struck the right keys. What's more, in close rapport, his lips form - a mute "Bye, Bye." With a rare smile, he leaves me. I watch the fan blades reverse. My prayers answered - escorted by a faint, outgoing breeze.

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Date: 7/7/2013 12:54:00 AM
Reason, it is such a nice piece of work, i like it !! Jag
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:17:00 PM
really enjoyed this TFS well expressed Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:47:00 PM
Reason, this is really a great poem that you penned. One of your best!
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:31:00 PM
Nice write. For correct grammar purposes, just change "slow" at the start of your second line to "slowly". You need an adverb there in lieu of an adjective.
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Date: 6/27/2013 10:35:00 PM
I really like this. Great job!
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