Get Your Premium Membership

View From the Second Comet - Act 1

Out of its axis In negative spin Our planet we call earth Is diminishing Three days earlier A comet struck home From the black of the universe On its trajectory roam The world as normal Went about its day Parents worked While their children played We had heard before That a comet may strike But the observatory in Hawaii Said we were well out of its sight But unknown to us all It had split into two The smallest section Towards us flew As it broke from the main body In its twisted break Its angle changed We now just await On the day of the impact Half the world was asleep While the other half Were already in weep It struck a volcano Near the Indian Ocean As fissures opened In lava spewed motion As we watched on the news We could hardly believe Our planet being obliterated Will we have time to grieve On CNN A report comes in The shuttle Liberty is following As the second part of the comet spins It too has changed Its trajectory course To our planet it heads For now we all, fear the worst Presidents, Prime Ministers Are all on the phone Asking, What can we do To stop this destructive roam? http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-8.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/30/2009 9:36:00 AM
Very compelling narrative, James. Can't wait to read the second part! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2009 6:57:00 AM
On to Act 2. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 10/27/2009 5:09:00 PM
Nice use of slant and traditional rhyme. The short lines give this piece a fast pace which works well with the action. I agree with Sara. This is such a creative poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 10/26/2009 1:57:00 PM
Aren't we glad that its not true. For if it was we would all be blue.There is always that possiblility but thank God that he is the keeper of the universe and it won't happen unless he wills it. Keep writing. Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things