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You appear in my presence once again unfulfilled this love, it yearns, it lingers a moment approaches to a romantic sin you an orchestra of mystery, and I the singer You bloom so comely, a gentle sway my dulcet beauty, pure love you emit I long for a novel of this mellifluous day a scented candle of romance softy lit Time shall pass, soon to come a love imbued where passion run a silence approaching, a distant beat of a lone drum an unfulfilled love falls with the sun I brood in wait of loving passion escape a hymn, a scent, a delicately bushed scape..... ___________________________________________

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Date: 8/4/2010 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this very lovely sonnet. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win ^Rick in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "The English or Shakespearean Sonnet". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Rick. Wonderful sonnet. Lainie
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Date: 8/1/2010 5:49:00 PM
this one is VERY beautiful, elegant and very deserving of a win. Congratulations. Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:41:00 AM
This has such a delicate feel to it.....so lovely! Congratulations on this winning sonnet, Rick. Quite lovely! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:10:00 PM
lovely sonnet congrats c:
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:46:00 PM
Very romantic and deftly written. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations,Rick on your win, Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:03:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this magnificent write and beautiful piece ... enjoy another big win my friend..so well deserved.. with luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:46:00 AM
I am impressed by your approach to the theme of unfulfilled love. Congrats on 4th place in my contest, Rick
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:18:00 PM
romantic piece, loved it
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Date: 7/21/2010 4:45:00 PM
I love it Rick! Makes me think... About>>> lol ~ vMolly
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