Vein of Life

Vein of Life Full river flowing into the open bay. Standing on a stone bridge. On a morning day. Levy’s are built to hold water in. To stop the cycle of, Embankment water erosion. A main flowing, vein of life. Keeps our world fresh, and all things alive..

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/28/2009 12:03:00 AM

wow, this ones great! love the imagery. I'm sorry for the misunderstanding my friend, I had no idea what you were talking about. lol. I get it now, you've been writing for a while and can take poems over into here. I've been writing just under two years, these that appear are 'written as you see them'. :) I'm still learning and I appreciate you very much for reading and taking time to comment. We'll chat graphics for sure! Perhaps via email, i'm beat right now, off to bed. :) ty again.