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Vasava - An Untold Story 9/Many

Vasava –An Untold story 9/Many Lots and lots of people of Patilputra* and of Magadh Were assembling in the beautiful court of Magadh A group of singers were singing a chorus song Be in life like Bharata* the brother of Rama Who never tried to establish him as a king, although Rama gave him his entire kingdom for fourteen years, but Bharata* Ruled in Ram’s absence, without using any royal powers for his own Over joyed by the feelings and happiness of the day All the citizens of Magadh were singing And playing the musical instruments and drums While denouncing Ravana as a tyrant and demon king Who had committed atrocities on the people of Bharat* The presence of king Udiyan* in the ceremony Had made the occasion more charming and attractive To see only this handsome king of Ujjain’s kingdom Lots and lots of citizens of Patilputra* and Magadh* Were assembling in the beautiful court of Magadh Candles were burning in colored chandeliers and glass lamps Spreading their beautiful lights in the darkness of night In the shaking flames of the burning candles Happiness was showering on the Palace of Magadh But a rare light was also spreading from the beauty of Vasava Ravindra to continue in 10 Copy writes protection as per Poetry Soup automatic Copy write provisions also. Kanpur India 20th March 2010 *Lord Rama* Lord Rama is one of the most commonly adored gods of Hindus and is known as an ideal man and hero of the epic Ramayana *Bharata Bharata is a legendary king of Aryan tribes in Hindu mythology. He was the first to conquer all of Greater India, uniting it into a single entity which was named after him as Bharatavarsa or India * Patilputra . The old name of Patna - a city of India in Bihar state * Magadh The Kingdom of Magadh was located in the current State of Bihar and other adjoining states of India. * Bharat Short old name of Bharatavarsa or India

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Date: 6/10/2010 2:53:00 AM
Very sweet full of enjoyment, on this part. The passion is warming up to strong. All the other parts are so passionet, i feel the story getting deeper and more romantic in a seductive way for the readers. Enjoyed wiht pleasure to continue the story,..Poet D.
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Date: 3/22/2010 1:09:00 PM
hmmm, that last line leads me to think something sweet is coming. . . . I will save the next part for later. I am rushing off here now. thanks for your comment to my poem. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:47:00 AM
Lyrical songs and music mixed with poetic lines of beauty so vivid and vibrant .. its like a magnet drawing others to enter into the story with u and the characters.. luv.. so enjoyed ..Linda-Marie..
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