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Vampire Acrostic

Very pointed teeth And skin that’s rather pale, Maybe wears a cape, Prefers some blood to ale, Isn’t fond of sun - Required to hunt at night. Encore! More necks to bite… For Andrea’s Acrostic contest #3

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/12/2013 12:13:00 PM

I like the "encore" very much! Great write, dear Jack! Wish you the best for the contest! Blessings, Hanitra

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/9/2013 7:45:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 8:12:00 PM

ooo. awesome word to write on.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/8/2013 2:59:00 PM

congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! Perfect for this time of year...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2013 11:18:00 AM

Hello Jack, , congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/7/2013 10:31:00 PM

Nicely done for Andrea's contest. Another congrats coming your way. You are on a roll. love phyl

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/5/2013 6:45:00 PM

stopping back to say congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2013 12:09:00 AM

You are so funny, Jack. I just knew this must be yours!!! Congrats on another vampire poem win!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2013 2:50:00 AM

wickedly beautiful, jack... my pulse almost stopped; grrreat work!..:) huggs

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/28/2013 12:35:00 PM

awesome piece...good luck on Andrea's Contest ;) have a great day!! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2013 10:13:00 AM

love this Jack,, brilliant...

Skat A

Date: 9/24/2013 4:59:00 PM

A very fun acrostic Jack.... lol... about the ending I want more BITE.... Love~~~~ SKAT

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/22/2013 8:32:00 PM

You did the vampire acrostic before I did my friend, oh well, yours is probably better than what mine would have been! Maybe I should do my version and compete a friendly contest with you, sound like fun Jack? I'll try that when I'm not so sore, I have to get off my sore place here after I say hi to Gail and comment on her poem! This write is tremendous, I just love the image of the typical vampire is like! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2013 6:34:00 PM

Cute one, Jack..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/22/2013 4:43:00 PM

...reading this made me think of my childhood fear and how i held the covers tight around my neck each night...nicely penned acrostic...good luck in the contest...enjoyed this one :)