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My Ex Husband:- Lied to me Was often drunk and violent Belittled me Spent all my money Ran off with my best friend ... HE’S FIRED! Position is now vacant the new applicant needs to be:- Honest Teetotal and gentle as a lamb Stand by me through thick and thin and not put me down Solvent enough to buy me the odd bunch of flowers or an orchid Loyal – (the only real friends I have left are male!) If you think you can fill this position ... YOU’RE HIRED! Contest: The Interview – Judy Konos 7th June 2015 Jan Allison

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Judy Konos

Date: 7/4/2015 6:11:00 PM

Excellent but then when are you not?

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 6:18:00 PM

Thank you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/30/2015 7:23:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, my friend. How've you been? I see you're back. Hope all is well.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:30:00 PM

thanks for dropping by Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2015 6:33:00 PM

Hello dear friend, I love this, sometimes firing an old husband would be nice if it was that easy. How about a computer chip to reprogram our mates. a 7 hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:30:00 PM

great idea Eve lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/26/2015 3:26:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congratulations..... **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:29:00 PM

thanks :-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2015 2:42:00 PM

Jan <3 Congratulations on your win. Love Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:29:00 PM

thanks :-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 6/26/2015 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:29:00 PM

thanks for a great contest Judy:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 6/10/2015 3:35:00 PM

You never mentioned being late. I'm at the Quayside awaiting the Ferry. Being ex Navy, I'd rather sail to Douglas, erm Jan, not Douglas, that's the Capital. Phew, you never mentioned being dumb either ;-) hugs always, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2015 3:39:00 PM

lol thanks James I just hope they have the apprentice elsewhere so others understand the humourous aspect here:-) Ohhh I hate people being late it is so irritating my ex used to do it - no wonder he is an ex :-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 6/9/2015 4:23:00 PM

Jan one of the marks of a good writer is that they can write from another point of view in a believable way. And those who do not know anything about you will believe this whole heartedly. Wonderful job! ;-p Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2015 4:25:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Janet I simply have to go with the flow of my pen over which I have no control! hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/9/2015 5:30:00 AM

Jan, I like this one. How artful indeed!! I wish you the best for the contest. (I gather that this is fictional from the comments below.) A "7" from me, and all the best!! Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2015 5:37:00 AM

Yes total fiction as so many of my poems are Gary but sadly I guess some can relate to words I write here :-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2015 7:23:00 AM

smashing WANTED advertisement or is it a online dating?.. lol.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/8/2015 7:32:00 AM

ha ha ha could be seen as either - but i better not let hubby see this one or 'marry me' or he may get worried lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/7/2015 1:20:00 PM

Lovely and entertaining!! Do you need me to come along with a lie-detector machine? Better to be safe than sorry:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 1:26:00 PM

LOL Paul thankfully as you know it is total fiction - gosh I don't think I could put up with a man like that but i know these abusive relationships do happen:-( Hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/7/2015 10:10:00 AM

Jan, this sad to see the abuse you endured with your ex but happy to see that you know exactly what you need, I love this poem,you write poems-gossamer and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 10:59:00 AM

sorry for the confusion - i was hoping for a few offers when i wrote my 'marry me' poem just in case lol maybe with this poem and that one my poor hubby should start to worry lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2015 10:17:00 AM

Oh, you little devil, so happy you have your position filled!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 10:14:00 AM

Broken wings it is pure fiction for the contest - in fact we are celebrating 24 yrs on 22nd June - am glad it is a realistic write though:-) Hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 6/7/2015 8:49:00 AM

Jan, this is freakin' hilarious. Jan I once bought my wife a beautiful ring on a Tuesday. She asked "why did you buy me this ring? I replied "because today is Tuesday." The ring has forever been called the "Tuesday Ring". Hope you find a worthy candidate to fill the position.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 9:05:00 AM

Aww John that is a wonderful story. My hubby is not a jewllery buying man - I just buy my own lol. We are celebrating our 24th wedding anniversary on 22nd June - when I saw the title of the contest 'the Apprentice' TV programme sprang to mind so I went with you're hired he's fired as my starting point - just hope Judy likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/7/2015 1:05:00 AM

LOL Jan, so if I can fake all those qualities? I have a chance? LOL!!!! Loved this!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 1:16:00 AM

ha ha ha :-) I am not sure if it is what Judy is after but the idea came to me late last night and I have to go with the flow of my muse. 'the Apprentice' TV programme - came to me when I saw the interview theme - guess marriage can be a job for life hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/6/2015 11:20:00 PM

lordy...if I didn't know this is fiction, I'll be sad with the Loyal quip! This is very good, my friend. Funny and yet people can relate. A 7. Blessings for the contest! Hope you're having a nice weekend. Hugs! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 12:19:00 AM

I went for the contrasts in the ex and the vacancy to fill lol it is a fiction write purely for the contest:-) i just hope Judy likes it:-) I don't usually get to enter a contest first that place is usually grabbed by someone else but she has blocked Judy so I sneaked in lol Hugs jan xxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/6/2015 10:06:00 PM

G'day Jan... you won't be able to see over the stack of applicant papers Jan - good luck - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 12:17:00 AM

LOL thanks Lindsay:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2015 9:40:00 PM

good heavens, you are fast on the draw today, Jan. I just now SAW the bloody contest. hahaha. Good one!!! (did I use bloody appropriately. I am trying to learn British speak!!)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 12:16:00 AM

ha ha ha you are learning fast - I expected someone else to get in first lol was amazed mine was lol - I just came up with the theme and went for a bit of a humourous take - am not sure if you have 'the apprentice' in the US but thought it went well with the 'vacancy' theme - i just hope Judy likes it:-) Hugs jan xx

Cupids Arrow

Date: 6/6/2015 6:50:00 PM

This is great Jan....If it were true the line would be down the street

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2015 12:14:00 AM

lol Tim:-) I am not sure if it is what Judy was after but i went for a bit of a fun aspect:-) Hugs jan xx