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When I think of US, I can't help myself sometimes, I get CAUGHT, and caught up!! Captivated by the means and ways, we do the things that we do!! US who tend to elevate the entire human race, that much closer to the creator and all of his greatness!!!!!! Sometimes I think of us and I get STUCK!!! AWWWWWEEE STTTRRUCK!!!! Surprised and mesmerized, by the way we live our lives. Fore we are the kings and queens of creativity, innovation and improvisation. Taking a whole lot of nothin' and turning it into somethin' PHENOMENAL!!!!!! That's us. Often times, I think of US and I get CHOKED!!! and choked up!! As i come to realize the journies taken, the pathways lied, The sacrafices our ancestors made . To insure us in this day,time and age, that the whole world take note, and be amazed, SIMPLY BY US!!!!!!

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Date: 12/9/2009 2:28:00 PM
Interesting topic that you have chosen on which to write this piece. God was good to allow us to be here at this time and this place. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/4/2009 7:42:00 PM
We're creative, our Father's instinct. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:30:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Jesu. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:39:00 PM
This is what makes poetry worth both reading and writing...Awesome read!! Well done!
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:35:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:07:00 AM
Awesome poem, Jesu. Congratulation, on your feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:43:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/10/2009 8:19:00 PM
The sacrifice of the ancestors, to insure the safety of future generations, it is a life long battle for each generation to make the world a little bit better for the next one to come. wonnderful poem Jesu ~Trudy~
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