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Upon A Bed Of Petals

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Upon A Bed Of Petals

Her life was full of joy and dreams
Expressing life and whatever that means
To live each day with new filled hope
Was the only way she knew to cope

Her love was hidden deep within
Full of passion,angst and sin
She loved a man she shouldn't take
Will she pay for her mistake

They shared their passion behind the door
Hidden from all, she wanted more
She deserved more than she received
And when he'd leave she cry and grieve

Upon a bed of petals she lay
Sobbing, imagining another way

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:00:00 PM
    Beautiful sonnet and beautiful story... Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Another nice and lovely win Jennifer, congratulations with your beautiful poem. take care * xox-PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Quite a touching piece. Congrats also.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:20:00 AM
    Jennifer, this is outstanding...and sad. Congrats!

    Oliver Avatar Jennifer Marie Oliver
    Date: 4/15/2013 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it's sad, luckily it's not me. Someone I know. It's very sad when a good person fall into the lions liar.
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:39:00 PM
    congrats Jennifer ...Seren

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Congratulations Jennifer xx

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:47:00 PM
    Jenifer, having read it again some days later. It flowed even better. Thank you kindly for your lovely comments, they are much appreciated, James :)

    Oliver Avatar Jennifer Marie Oliver
    Date: 4/8/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I did tighten it up a little, checked my punctuation, and changed a word here or there. Thank you for your help. J.
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Written from another point of view. Should be a winner. Thank you for your nice comments on my work. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:27:00 PM
    I like it Jennifer, love the background in it's thinking to it's fore. I'd love to see it polished to make it strike home. Have a lovely weekend, James :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 12:39:00 AM
    Nicely done Jennifer. A beautiful sonnet of forbidden love. Good luck in the contest - this should do well. Joe