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UP TO SUCCESS, WANDERER

Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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UP TO SUCCESS, WANDERER

Ten thousands I do not have..
Sparkling diamonds unfortunately Im not bestowed as well
Big architectural design homeI don't have as well 
And So I have not also seen much of the world..

However..
What I do have is my family and my friends
What I do have is a mind willing to learn and discover 
What I do have is a heart sensitive to feel and understand...
What I do have is a handful experience

I have loved thee..
With all that I am I did..
Though It did not end to what I want..
Still, I remained hopeful 

As much as, I want to give..
There's a drive I need to control..
As much as I want to show..
There's that voice saying: "careful"

How can I not stop?
If it can be; it might be..
How can I not go on?
If I don't feel the possibility..

Between heaven and hell, it might be..
Over the sun and under the sea, maybe..
I will bravely the risk..
I will courageously seek..

Even if I'm not sure of the result..
Even if I may be place in hot waters..
I must try; I must try..
I must not quit; must not quit..

By: olive_eloi
oct. 6, 2013
1:40pm

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  1. Date: 11/3/2014 3:10:00 PM
    Sometimes one has to wander to find success. Many come to the UK for this for various reasons. Work, free Health Care, Benefits, and if it's Scotland, the Rain - joking - James :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 11/4/2014 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hahahha yes I have been thinking of this.. but just I wish I know that is ever I fall somebody will do catch me afterall. :) I want too.. to see more of the world .. to see what more is there for me..