Up In the Sky - Balloon

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~Up In The Sky~ (Balloon) Watch Closely In the sky Not for objects but We should be watching all time For Jesus the son of God When read his words see signs It's wonderful news It is something great Means that Jesus He's coming back Soon so Look At The Sky And Seek for him and his Angels descend from Heaven, yet none knows When he'll come but the Bible doesn't tell lies. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 January,12,2015 The "Balloon" is a poetry style created by Erich J. Goller.

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/13/2015 11:34:00 AM

The poem is a lovely one, Dorian; the form is new to me...will have to look it up and find out why it's called a balloon! The shape of this poem reminds me of a monstrance, which would go well with the religious theme. hugs // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Paul, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2015 9:43:00 PM

I love it, Dorain, 7 Blessings and hugs my friend

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:44:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Eve, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Tim Smith

Date: 1/12/2015 6:12:00 PM

What a creation Dorian..love it...hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Tim, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Jan Allison

Date: 1/12/2015 11:31:00 AM

wow what an beautiful poem in an stunning form! I am in awe of your creativity Dorian - 7!!!! Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:44:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Jan, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "