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Unsung Poem

Unsung poem Orange of twilight fades into darkness of night my poem misjudged... Heart cries in despair no readers and no comments emotions unheard... A brilliant sunrise hold my pen as sparrows chirp words silently flow..... Written July 5th, 2015 For contest by Marvin celestial

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/28/2015 7:27:00 AM
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Beautiful poem, Dr. Upma: Congratulations on your win.
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Mary Rotman
Date: 7/27/2015 8:44:00 AM
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I love this poem. Such a delicate touch to show an emotion many of us feel! Congratulations!
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Skat A
Date: 7/24/2015 4:51:00 PM
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Dr Upma, congratulations, awesome senryu. SKAT LOVE
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 7/24/2015 3:50:00 PM
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Interesting and wonderful piece,dear friend.. Congrats on your superb win in this contest.....
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/24/2015 3:31:00 PM
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Yes in the end we write for ourselves. Love this wise message. Congrats on your win. SuZ
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/24/2015 11:33:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/24/2015 10:15:00 AM
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Congratz!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 8:28:00 AM
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wonderful imagery Dr Sharma - may your wise words always flow:-) hugs Jan xx
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/7/2015 6:02:00 AM
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A pretty poem, with an outstanding third senryu. A 7.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/7/2015 8:56:00 PM
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Thnx julia
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/6/2015 12:46:00 PM
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Your imagery is great, Dr. Upma! I can imagine you sitting by a table or desk pondering your prose.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:27:00 PM
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Thnx Ralph!
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Kp Nunez
Date: 7/6/2015 7:14:00 AM
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Sensitive and honest to one's feelings, you have written something to which most of us can relate to. Whatever happens after we have finished with the write, there is a satisfaction that we write from the heart, Dr. Upma.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:27:00 PM
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Thnx Kim!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2015 11:35:00 PM
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wow, this is REALLY good stuff. I hope you get LOTS of reads AND comments, dear. You did excellent work here.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:27:00 PM
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Thnx Andrea for ur sweet words always!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/5/2015 10:47:00 PM
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Upma, so beautifully penned, such a sadness within the silent words, wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I love you . . .
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:16:00 PM
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Thnx BW for ur super 7 and kind visit!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/5/2015 2:23:00 PM
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This sometimes happens...remember who you are writing for...you...
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:16:00 PM
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Yes true Tim! Appreciate ur kind visit!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2015 8:41:00 AM
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:) Lovely, My Dear Dr Upma....Yes...let those words keep flowing. Hugs to you!!! :) Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:15:00 PM
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Thnx dear Eileen! Love ur visits!

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