'unspoken Need -The Second Part' Contest Poem

Love from two ends close and fix themselves into a monolithic bond. One line from "Unspoken Need -The Second Part" One Liner About Love Contest Sponsored by Silent One Written 2 Oct 2016 at Camp Hovey in The Republic of Korea

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Paloma P

Date: 10/8/2016 7:50:00 AM

Part two says it all and sums it up nicely, riveting!

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 10/8/2016 11:12:00 AM

Thanks Paloma! There are many more lines to "Unspoke Need -The Second Part". It's still in development and I'm still deciding if I will post it or not. I might save it so you guys can read it in print once I finish my collection here shortly. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! MC

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/8/2016 12:09:00 AM

The two indeed do become one. I enjoyed your artistry this evening.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 10/8/2016 11:09:00 AM

Ha, ha, ha, thanks Rick! I always appreciate your comments. I will say this is just a line from the whole poem which is essentially part 2 to Unspoken Need. Not quite sure I'm done with it. At any rate, thanks for reading and commenting my friend! MC