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Unseen - Collage Contest

Here I hang with dust round the edges No longer in vogue kept on an old ledge. Memories I hold of people and places One of a baby, flat on her tum. silly hat on reaching down to her bum, Child now grown up and in her teens, another hat on wearing her jeans, Beautiful, she was a winner in a show, such a busy girl always on the go Parents picture, on a cruise, looking happy, Tad no longer here, so sad to loose Pictures of her animals, Boxers 3 loved them all dearly, now here with me, Holiday snaps, looking very snazzy, First day in uniform trying to look bossy Many pictures she has removed, too painful to look at them, so nobody views So many memories for her to look back. Seems she has gone forward, forgotten the past. I lay here unseen. Dated Oct 1st 2013

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Date: 11/12/2013 11:15:00 PM
I loved this the first time, and as I recall, your entry inspired me to finally do one of my own. Sorry I never see your poetry as much as I'd like to. congrats to you on your win.(have you been here very much lately?)
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the win, Seren
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations Seren..
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
i must agree your collage comes to life nicely....lovely write Seren...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 11:06:00 PM
I really like how you made the whole collage come to life. This has helped me to see better how the challenge is to be done, Seren. I am trying to see other poems to get a sense how to do this one. Yours is great!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/3/2013 12:53:00 AM
Thank you Andrea but maybe my approach is wrong lol, just the libra way....Seren
Date: 10/2/2013 6:19:00 PM
This is a wonderful and glorious write my friend! You have surely brought wondrous heartfelt feelings through your poem! I truly loved reading this tremendous piece this evening! What a lovely inspiring poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/3/2013 12:55:00 AM
Hi Russell, many thanks for your kind words....Seren

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