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Forbidden Fruit

Unrequited love is the forbidden fruit of the heart. And if you long for its taste, it will tear your heart apart. A love never meant to be; drains dying dreams of magic. And like a moth to a flame, results are often tragic. Behind a veil of false smiles, you try to hold back the tears. And yet, hope's mired in despair; where it has languished for years. Loneliness and fear form a gauntlet of sad emotions. And you've practically cried enough tears; to fill oceans. You suckle reality on the bosom of the night. For fantasies morph into shackles; at dawn's breaking light. Sequestered within your heart, love has brought you to your knees. But with dreams, you get to be with whomever you please. (Quatrain) 1/13/2015

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Date: 3/13/2018 3:00:00 PM
Love the imagery of these two lines "Sequestered within your heart love has brought you to your knees." Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/15/2016 9:19:00 PM
What a true description of this "ailment"! Been there, done that....I feel your pain. Wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/23/2015 6:31:00 AM
Wow...quite real and relevant to me..quite the amazing description of how unrequited love feels.it it made me cry to be honest..a7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/23/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Joel, you defiantly know how to create a smile, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2015 12:20:00 AM
EMILE, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 9:44:00 PM
Beautifully penned and oh, so true...that just sums it all up, so well.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 10:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, I remain in your debt. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 3:11:00 PM
Im working on a poem about with the same gist..hope it comes even close to being as good as yours..If you haven't entered this is the Justice Love contest you should...BG
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Barbara, what a friendly thing to say...I will enter this poem as you have suggested. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 2:28:00 PM
Oh Emile the imagery is wonderful but oh so sad - I especially adore the moth to the flame stanza -It's hard to move on when your heart has been broken and to eventually move on but I guess its something we have all overcome at some stage in our life :-( Hugs Jan xx. its a 7 from me:-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I bask in your praise. Emile.

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