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Under the Same Moon -In Afghanistan

Here in violence and in beauty, living under the same moon The beauty is so ancient, but the present violence here consumes On one hand Afghanistan is all that it appears Insurgents here are so deadly; through the land they spread fear But a turn of that coin, would reveal a much different side A land which contested the Great Alexander, and ruled by Shahs with pride With its mighty Hindu Kush, and many rivers at hand The graveyard of countless empires, its resistance that spans The brave here fight hard, a fierce gamble, with their inheritance of wealth Battling the Taliban with an opulence of old grit, using the hands they were dealt Keeping Kandahar, Herat, Mazar-i Sharif, and the capital -Kabul Free from tyrannical domination, oppressed by Taliban rule I’m in awe of these courageous Afghans, this country has come far This is the Afghanistan which I see, who else will share where they are? This poem was inspired by "Under The Same Moon" a three way collaboration by Poet Destroyer A, Chris D.Aechtner, and NIKKO P.. Written DEC 2013 in Afghanistan

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Date: 10/13/2016 5:23:00 PM
Painful to read, but poignantly written, there's a quiet elegance midst the turmoil. Now I know what you were talking about MC! :) Seven+
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:36:00 PM
It's a beautiful country, with a lot of problems. Honestly, I don't see an easy way forward for Afghanistan...though they do have a lot to fight for. I just wanted to capture all of that and paint a different perspective aside from what you see on FOX, CNN, BBC, etc. Thanks for your wonderful comment! MC
Date: 10/8/2016 3:46:00 PM
What a pity that there are no comments on this poem, MC!! I understand that you were serving in Afghanistan, where you encountered the ugliness of war, but also had eyes for the positive things around you. Excellent title and content...This deserves a 7 rating! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/8/2016 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Paul, I waited patiently figuring someday soon this guy here would earn its first comment LOL! Yes, I was over there for most of 2013 and some of 2014. Afghanistan has a lot of problems, but I think people forget its history and beauty. The poem I pattern this one from is great by the way! MC

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