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Under the Same Moon -3-Way-Collaboration-

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Under the Same Moon -3-Way-Collaboration-

 ~Under the Same Moon~

P.D.
Our days are different, living under the same moon
Down here in TEXAS, life carries a different tune
This world spins on its lovely axis
Listening to our Tex-Mex of our English lexis
We share a world made with the trust of God's hand
Revealing the beauty that life continue to expand
Don't underestimate our football image of our Cow Boy land
A mysterious Mockingbird only we Texans understand
Surrounded by the sweetest Pecan trees
The Northern Winters come in like a breeze and a tease
We also have them Blue Bonnet fields that come and go
Tell me about CANADA, what makes its motion flow?
Branded like a Long Horn, with my Lone Star State pride
How about you, CHRIS A. What's up on your side?

Chris D.Aechtner
Different lives, different lands, living under the same moon,
waking up to the ghostly calls of the wild loon.
Look upon mountains and forests stretching into infinity-
mighty Sequoias and tall Douglas firs stand majestically.
I could offer stereo-typical images of hockey, snow and moose,
or sockeye salmon, maple syrup and the great Canadian goose,
but we Canucks are becoming tired of idly standing by
as the rest of the world dips its fingers into our Northern pie.
We are a nation of peaceful, open-minded hospitality,
shying away from brutality by offering liberal neutrality.
Before I blow my top as my strong emotions collide,
I should definitely step away from my nationalistic pride,
and ask about the Philippines and its tropical flair-
how about you Nikko, what is happening over there?

NIKKO P.
Oceans away, here I am, living under the same moon
Sun’s rising over there; here, dish runs away with the spoon
My sleep is whacked, so I’m wide awake when you are,
amazing how we can all be in one place even if we’re all very far
Where islands form the shape of an old man, waters hug our shores
Tropical Paradise here, when you explore the great outdoors
Awesome sunsets, bountiful fiestas, the warmest smiles to greet you...
We here just love to eat when there’s nothing else to do!
Colorful rice cakes, freshest seafood, the most succulent mangoes~
Sunny days or rainy days, the creativity here just flows.
Resilient. This is a word that pops to mind when I think of us Filipinos-
We bend and bounce back, no matter how hard the wind blows.
This is just a sneak peek, but I’d love to know more about Utah
Care to share what’s on your side, my dear friend Andrea?

      ( 3 Way Collaboration )

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  1. Date: 9/9/2014 5:52:00 PM
    what a great idea this was. very creative.

  1. Date: 8/13/2014 10:18:00 AM
    As I read poem, I feel I am reading replica of 'Ulysses' of James Joyce. Sometimes it is far from comprehension. Choosing of words with apt English is symbol of premier psychological excellence...congrats! Ch v ramana

  1. Date: 7/8/2014 8:04:00 PM
    How many people rite poems that rhyme?

  1. Date: 6/1/2014 5:40:00 AM
    Great idea Linda hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:53:00 PM
    I just read this on the long poem page,,,, very nicely done from the three of you. I live in calif ;} have a great day PD;}

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 3:49:00 AM
    -this is a poem that ill read 20 years after and feel this great- beautiful work, 3 makes it perfect..LUCAS-

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 9:30:00 PM
    wow awesomeness from the 3 of you, well done :) xxx

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 9:16:00 PM
    hi pd :) yup, I have been bad (or should I say my muse is-- ran away with the sandguy again or something...& haven't been here much too) anyway hopefully I do get to post a new poem soon...happy to see you here ^_^! & wow, somebody below sure is going crazy with wonder? ;) -- see you around ^_^

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:44:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing!? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future. Take care! All the best to you!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:44:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break!? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future. Take care! All the best to you!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:43:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future. Take care! All the best to you!!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:43:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future. Take care! All the best to you!!!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 4:36:00 PM
    More congrats P.D. my BFF on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. another rare beauty from your talented pen luv...

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 4:32:00 PM
    <(^___^)>!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 5:17:00 AM
    hi pd :) lol your same moon comment led me back here ;) well haha be glad to know that this particular person who's oceans away actually had a combined sleep of umm 7 hours last night?? well my connection zonking out on me actually helped so I wasn't glued to my computer screen, lol! & eek you had a toothache? you'd have been better off chatting the night away then --hope you're feeling better! & haha we have bats here, circling round our house ;)-- so nice to see all the comments here :)

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:16:00 AM
    Ps. Smile ~ I believe that I shall fave this gem of a write; not only for its splendidness but also because, three of the better poets and poetess' grace its loveliness ~ Smile, "Bye Again Dear!":) ~

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:13:00 AM
    Smile ~ I believe that after reading this enlightening and wonderful write dear that, as I gaze upon the full coming moon in 5 days that, I shall think for a moment of not only this poe but also, the three of "You;" of course, with love and warmth in my heart ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always, to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow Dear Sidney LeeAnn, Wrapped Amid The Arms of Love;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 12:07:00 AM
    Smile ~ "Brilliant; Classic; Beautiful & Bright; 'Loved It!!!" ~ "Hello Dear Lovely & Gifted Sidney LeeAnn" ~ "Thank You" for stopping by dear and for "Your" kind thoughts and com and, I also hope that "Your Brightness" is doing well dear lady ~ Smile, "Texas;" you know, I have Always been a Cowboy fan!! And, its been a few years since I have been there but, glad to know that "Your Treasures" are amid its borders ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 7:02:00 PM
    I dropped by to check the comments, since they don't show up on my own list....which is good because you have the bigger readership P.D! Ha ha! I laughed at Nathan's comment below about the sheep and his wolves. Hell, let me be the egotist here and say that I am a BIG wolf myself, and MY wolfpack can take his wolfpack anyday! Haha! Just having some fun~Chris

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 5:20:00 PM
    Very well written, gang. It set me to thinking on another poem also. Keep up the good work, God Bless Cile

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