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Unbelievable Journey - Any Subject Contest

My mind took the unbelievable  journey To the reservoir of life Taking in the mystical  memory Of the time I walked from strife Remembering the quadrivial not sure which track I must avoid Til i heard the distant voices Chanting  a pericope in the wind It was then that I saw it Lying on the earth A ligure shining but not brightly Not showing its worth. Using the words, : unbelievable, mystical, pericope, ligure, reservoir, quadrivial Penned 9 July 2013

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Date: 7/27/2013 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Seren! Always, Annalise
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/28/2013 7:29:00 AM
Annalise many thx for your congrats...Seren
Date: 7/27/2013 9:45:00 AM
Seren,.... Congratulations, in the any subject contest... have yourself a sweet day... LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2013 7:49:00 PM
Thank you Linda ....Seren
Date: 7/26/2013 6:29:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your awesome win. love ~ SKAT~ ...
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Date: 7/27/2013 12:28:00 AM
Thanks SKAT ....Seren
Date: 7/26/2013 5:51:00 PM
Seren one fabulous rhyme, a well deserve win. Congratulations! Warm Smiles, Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/27/2013 12:27:00 AM
Thank you Connie .....Seren
Date: 7/26/2013 6:45:00 AM
Very simply done and explained. Congratulations, sometimes less is more.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 2:39:00 PM
lol Richard, glad i didnt have to make it long one
Date: 7/26/2013 3:40:00 AM
Hi Seren Congrats on your win in my contest ty for entering my contest Shadow x smiles
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, wasnt easy words you chose ...Seren
Date: 7/8/2013 8:21:00 PM
This is a tremendous write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a stupendous piece, such a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 2:36:00 PM
thank you Russell...Seren

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