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Udacha - to luck

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Udacha - to luck

Like the  gentle oak she stands strong  and slender, straight and sleek 
she will not bend nor break nor is she meek
Magnificent , mysterious ,wild and free 
because her fruit falls close , her offspring stands pretty as she 
 Softly glowing eyes ablaze in a fire of blue, 
Piercing ,teasing ,hypnotic and alluring 
A haunting beauty ,She stands tall in starry fields of lonely winter nights
While The pale moon sets against a velvet carpet of purple and white
Brown hair setting aflame the golden dawn of the oak after the long night 
She calls and I listen , all I need is a little luck and I will find 
Lost  amidst all the Russian passion and beauty ,a diamond among the rough 
For any man to find such a friend is more than enough 

Copyright © jim joyce

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  1. Date: 4/6/2015 5:15:00 PM
    More of the same please, nicely done

  1. Date: 4/5/2015 3:40:00 PM
    Hello JIm, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Very well penned piece of intense poetry. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 4:40:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this creative and descriptive work..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara