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two shoes

two shoes
under the chair
for somewhere to go
and someone to go with

looking lonely
but only
just waiting 
for the weather 
to clear 

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  1. Date: 7/17/2015 5:32:00 PM
    Hi RUDOLPH.. Your fabulous write is featured this week on the Soup homepage.. Huge congrats and the tip of my hat! -LYRIC

  1. Date: 7/15/2015 1:54:00 PM
    Totally amusing. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 7/13/2015 9:29:00 AM
    Smart and lovely!! Bravo!

  1. Date: 7/13/2015 1:05:00 AM
    Lovely, poem Rudolph, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 6:10:00 PM
    Hello Rudolph, This was short but powerfully said. Loved it. Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 4/17/2014 9:00:00 AM
    Thanks for an enjoyable read.

  1. Date: 4/17/2014 9:00:00 AM
    Thanks for an enjoyable read.

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 2:37:00 PM
    enjoyed your poem especially the ending. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 1:04:00 PM
    so beautiful ..go on

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 11:03:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/14/2014 4:14:00 AM
    great topic follow it up with a part two and three where do the shoes want to go? who do they belong to? who can you become by walking in those shoes? I wanted more!

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 11:38:00 PM
    I read this to my 7yr old granddaughter. Thumbs up. I read to her always I as well give it a thumbs :)

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 11:26:00 PM
    Rudolph...Simple words painting a simple picture of the basics of life...thus a flip flop in the way we view life... liked...

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 8:15:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 7:46:00 PM
    I loved your poem! It brought a chuckle and a smile to my face. Reminding me of all the days we were stuck indoors from the snowstorms that seemed endless here in NJ. Very simply written and straight to the point. Let's GO OUT!! The sun is finally shining!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you.