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Twilight-Quatern

Evening's serenity feels warm Lends freedom to breathe and conform When weight of day comes to an end Gives peace so a tired soul can mend And while length of days change in form Evening's serenity feels warm Soft twilight has feathered fingers As life's sounds quietly linger No potion so healing as this To find a star and make a wish Evening's serenity feels warm As moonlight and the stars perform And leaves the mind freedom to fly Silently glide to farthest sky Find peace from days collective storm Evening's serenity feels warm 4/21/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/13/2014 9:52:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations, in Andrea's awesome Do You Know Quatern? Contest... happy for all the winning poems.. Linda
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Date: 5/12/2014 3:49:00 PM
Peaceful and serene ...making this quatern what it is...a very lovely write. congrats on your win. // paul
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/12/2014 5:08:00 PM
thank you Paul for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/12/2014 10:26:00 AM
you moved me so, frederick.. best of cheers on your top spot!.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/12/2014 2:27:00 PM
thank you nette, for the placement in your contest
Date: 5/11/2014 9:19:00 PM
Very nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/12/2014 2:29:00 PM
thank you Joyce for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/11/2014 8:18:00 PM
Frederic, what a beautiful poem you have written. Congratulation on your high marks in Andrea's contest. Verlena
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/12/2014 2:30:00 PM
thank you Verlena for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/11/2014 4:33:00 PM
what wonderful imagery in this one. You are a lyrical poet who knows how to make those words sing. Congrats for your win in my contest. the repeating line was awesome.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/11/2014 4:57:00 PM
and thank you my friend for being as kind as you are
Date: 4/22/2014 1:21:00 AM
We poets especially need that serenity in our lives to renew our spirit and become inspired. Your poem says it all. It is quite beautiful Frederic.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/22/2014 5:58:00 PM
thank you Connie for reading and your kind response
Date: 4/21/2014 7:26:00 PM
I for one love verse with repetitive lines, very nice and so true, tonight I was marveling at the real yet simple joy of paying for ones own meal, eating with a friend, and walking out into the warmth of a new spring, full, in mind body & soul. Light & Love
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/21/2014 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Debbie for reading and for your kind response

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