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Twilight

With perfect time and meter, twilight falls, her multicolored veils sweep o'er the brink of day in sunset's fiery amber hues, wind cooled to damask rose and silver pink, her sighs, the sleepy sounds that Nature makes; trees sway in loving musical embrace. On Heaven's doorstep angels gather in and strain to view the beauty of her face. Her weary head bends low upon the breast of night, close wrapped in shawls of velvet gray: a briefly perfect moment, suspended for a breath, slips so silently away. Copyright, May 25, 2014

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Date: 4/15/2018 10:44:00 PM
Belated congrats on your gold medal finish, Faye.
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:55:00 AM
WOW.....JUST WOW.....a masterful picture painted
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Date: 1/22/2018 9:27:00 PM
Excellent, Faye! Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 1/22/2018 7:23:00 PM
Such magnificent imagery in your poem, Faye. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2018 6:07:00 PM
How beautiful! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/22/2018 5:38:00 PM
Lovely imagery. And perfect time and meter in your poem, too. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:47:00 PM
The imagery in this poem is heavenly, Faye, and the tender words just flow out so effortlessly. I really enjoyed reading your winning poem this evening! Congrats to you!
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Date: 9/8/2014 9:09:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..It was a moment of relaxation..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2014 12:57:00 PM
I am in awe at this amazing piece of art brought out in this beautiful poem. I couldn't begin to write how you do Faye. I lack the words, but at least I can see the beauty in yours. Congratulations
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Faye Gibson
Date: 9/6/2014 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, dear Brenda...so good to be acquainted with you. Are you still in Germany? My husband was stationed there.
Date: 9/5/2014 10:20:00 PM
So relaxing, calm, natural poetry flows from your fingers, I always enjoy it. A big winners list congrats :)
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Date: 9/5/2014 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations, FAYE , 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:13:00 AM
It reads like a melody...congrats on a great win Faye
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Date: 6/17/2014 5:10:00 PM
Dear Faye, Indeed this is "breath" taking! What a magnificent poem. I'm so glad to see you in Craig's winners' list. Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:17:00 PM
Absolutely lovely Faye... Good luck! :) Ana
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Date: 5/25/2014 7:49:00 PM
Very nice and warm poem...as a concert pianist I can appreciate Debussy's music...good luck in this contest....Noelle
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Date: 5/25/2014 4:45:00 PM
Beautiful..very. BG
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/25/2014 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara!!!
Date: 5/25/2014 3:44:00 PM
Faye, very beautiful, Best regards, Robert
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/25/2014 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Robert.

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