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Turn the Hoe To a Home Wife

She is dancing on top of the pole, Wearing only a pair of shoes. Lights are turning on and off, Owning the eyes of Evil's crews. In the corner a man bowed his head. Enjoying the pleasure of a vodka drinks. Waiting for the moment to end, And plead to a woman for an hour of seat. He is a typical guy from a downtown... Everyday visits and watching her afar. Never aware of love will grow... Dreaming that someday he take her home. But who will treat her like a beautiful flower? The question hanging on her thoughts. A broken glass that isn't fixable, Who has the courage to reborn her soul? She is a woman,dancing on her shoes. Lights are turning on and off. His man is sitting,waiting for his turn. Praying that her woman wear his ring.

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Michael Hilario

Date: 12/30/2013 7:17:00 AM

I was invited by someone before to go to a strip club and out of my youth and curiosity that time i went. It never did serve the purpose of being there, in my heart is pity and shame for me as a man to treat a woman that way. But they have they're own reason for doing such. But then the best thing we could do is not to judge and ridicule their life. We all have to deal with life's cruelty anyway. Nice poetry. Thanks for sharing kabayan

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/30/2013 9:06:00 AM

Salamat Mike!! :)) you were right,, they still need some respect and kindness..for whatever reason has put them on that place, we don't have the right to judge 'em.. IHappy New Year, kababayan :')

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2013 12:06:00 PM

wow, I just love this,,, We can all be transformed, from swing to ring. Aiyah, it must be hard to find a fitting wife, that is ready to settle. I have a friend, who got married under the same conditions. But, sadly she was not gonna stop working for him. The marriage was over in 3 months. Lust should not wear a ring at times.... enjoyed...LINDA

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/19/2013 12:14:00 PM

yeah, Linda..that's the saddest part of settling down..But most of women under this circumstances wished to find a man who can take them out of darkness... Some has succeed,most are not.. :( .. Thank you for a wondrous sight my friend... ^_^

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/19/2013 11:13:00 AM

I used to DJ in a club like this a very long time ago and it was kinda heartbreaking to see how some of the men & women treated each other. This writing spoke volumes. Incredible job.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/19/2013 11:26:00 AM

thank you, Drake for the visit.. =) you're an inspiration..thanks a lot! ^_^ huggs and kisses :))