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Trust, Mistrust

New friendships form and spawn a playful child fingers of innocence explore the bond each passing day it grows, entranced, beguiled wide-eyed it sees the now but not beyond. To freely give, thinking only the best, be generous in mind and heart and soul, welcomes with open arms and bares it's breast ignores the foibles and accepts the whole. Out of the blue Janus now turns his face and tramples on the love that trust had bought, no mercy shown, no shame and no disgrace, all that had gone before has come to nought. Friends come and go, so treat them all the same else by the rules they set you play the game. 1st March 2016 For contest 'Pick a theme', sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 6/20/2016 12:30:00 AM
Happy Father's Day Viv. We celebrate it here in USA today June 19th. I was thinking of you today and missing your poetry. I hope things are better for you. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:50:00 PM
Just saw you online so wanted to say hello, and hope that you are in good health and spirit! :)
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Date: 6/5/2016 10:10:00 AM
wow, that surely can happen, but I do not treat them quite all the same. I have those VERY good ones that I cannot fathom would hurt me in the end. It's kind of like having faith in God. We just have to do it. I really enjoyed this read. A soupmail for you
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:26:00 PM
Dealing with illness takes a toll Viv. I hope your wife is better soon. It was great reading a poem from you. I hope it does real well in the contest my friend. Take care and know my thoughts and prayers are with both of you. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 4/30/2016 8:01:00 PM
Hey Viv, Thought I'd drop in and see what you've been up to lately. I was surprised that your last write was almost two months ago. Anyway, I enjoyed this write, and I hope all is well for you. =)
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Date: 4/25/2016 10:32:00 PM
Where are you, Viv?
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/26/2016 12:53:00 AM
Hey Suzy D, apologies for my absence- my good lady hasbt been too good, awaiting another round of surgery soon, I havent a lot of free time at present, and my muse has taken a break, life is a little stressed at present. Will be back soon ( at least when she goes into hospital I'll get a bit of a break :) ) . Viv x
Date: 4/25/2016 1:39:00 PM
An excellent sonnet Viv! Splendid flow, rhyming and sentiment. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/22/2016 5:55:00 AM
I love this Viv. I hope you are well. Blessings and Aloha, Connie ; )
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Date: 4/11/2016 6:40:00 PM
So full of truth, Viv: Hope all is well. Have missed seeing you on the Soup. You are the pepper we need sometimes. SuZ
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:28:00 AM
You are a wise man indeed Mr Viv I especially like the final couplet:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:55:00 AM
Like this, I however think relationships of any kind, love, friendship, business, they happen over time, there is no shortcuts to building this bond, and with time, you see who is who, who stands tall and who stands small! My gut tells me, you are a tall one! :)
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:43:00 PM
Excellent sonnet Viv
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Date: 3/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Well written Sonnet, Viv. Wise man that you are.
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Date: 3/24/2016 9:00:00 AM
Greetings Viv. Congrats on your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 1:34:00 AM
I am deeply impressed with your style.''..and tramples on the love that trust had bought,..''...my fav line.. highly praiseworthy ! 7/7 You are unique !
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2016 5:07:00 AM
Thanks, Fiery, glad you enjoyed it. Viv x
Date: 3/3/2016 4:36:00 PM
"welcomes with open arms and bares it's breast" I love anything to do with breasts. A poem I need to read again and again.
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/4/2016 1:16:00 AM
True, normally you can't have one without the other. Next time perhaps?
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/3/2016 10:34:00 PM
If I had known that, Jean, I'd have written a couplet. Viv x
Date: 3/1/2016 4:36:00 AM
- Wise words in a great sonnet, Viv - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2016 12:30:00 AM
You are a very wise oracle Viv who often feeds us valuable info - thanks mate - Lindsay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/1/2016 12:38:00 AM
and... because I'm very tired, I apologise for typing your surname, too. regards, Wigley.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/1/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thanks, laurie, though on such subject matter I can't include my usual dose of buffoonery, beer and flatulence related content, for which I apologise unreservedly. Frrrp. pardon me..... Regards, Viv
Date: 3/1/2016 12:15:00 AM
I enjoyed your well written sonnet, Viv, with great words of insight and wisdom. I hope your poem does well in the contest :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/1/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, I've been so busy of late I've had so little time to jump in the soup, will call by your place soon. Viv x
Date: 3/1/2016 12:14:00 AM
Good lessons lies herein! Nice piece
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/1/2016 12:20:00 AM
Time and experience are bitter mistresses, Wilfred. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv

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