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Troubles!

Troubles! Depression embarks at early morn. Its goal is to demise and undertake the forlorn. It stealthily sneaks past happy hearts. And drags them to the ground. Troubles of life on the wings are borne They fly into the skies; never ever do they warn Their heaviness weakens laden parts. And brings one crashing down. Memories rumble around at times. And focus on un-pleasantries of the fiercest kind. They quickly demolish drifting wits. Where hopelessness is found. If your dwell on another’s problems, They’ll inhabit your mind like some evil goblin. Soon they take over your last sane bits. Suddenly, you’re unwound. STOP! DON’T JUMP! LOOK ABOUT AND THINK. Happiness can uplift the forlorn. STOP; partake of God’s beautiful morn. He tenderly heals unhappy hearts. Easier said than done? Beautiful thoughts are heavenly gifts. DON’T JUMP; find joyful dreams, which uplift. Read the scriptures or learn a new song. Be proactive, dear one. Search your heart; think of more pleasant days. LOOK ABOUT and see wonderful ways. Take good action; go plant a young tree. Life’s beauty you will see. Live, live, and live a little more. THINK. Demise could bring troubles galore. Stand tall. Be proud. You’re a child of God. So live your life with zest. You can do it! © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written around or before Summer 2006 Poetic form: Rhymes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/24/2010 1:37:00 AM
Great poem, brilliant advice. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:52:00 AM
An encouraging write Dane.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome commnts today
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:45:00 PM
Thank you for everything.
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:20:00 PM
Very powerful message to all in these lines, Dane Ann! Keep your pen flowing! Love, Gert
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:54:00 PM
what a message here.. you should do keep peoples head up out the water. A great message, enjoy your weekend. :)
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:12:00 PM
Great advice...Great write ... Great everything about this poem.. super for the Soupers to read... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/23/2010 11:09:00 AM
Excellent write and so true,amen.Thank you for your kind comments on my work.I will be reading more of yours.
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:08:00 AM
Excellent message in an excellent piece of work. Your words speak to the heart of the reader inspiring them to take charge of their own life and live the life that God has given to the fullest. Very well penned. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:25:00 AM
YEs, a wonderful message, DAne. I imagine you as a very positive and uplifting person! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:52:00 AM
Awesome message Dane ! I in the past spent like zero time reading long poetry,..yet ,..you are one of the few in which I have been drawn into, to reading such poetry, because ther is for the most part a deep message,..I like that,...write on Dane !!!! james
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