Trickle Down

You and I
may not agree
nothing to say
never to see

Yet I'm fulfilled
within my realm
When you're near
I am overwhelmed

Best I leave  
For a while    
Until I return
Promise to smile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/16/2014 8:16:00 PM
The honesty is deeply expressed in this short piece, Judy. Amazing choice of words,easy to relate to it's imagery. Enjoyable overall, Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:59:00 PM
I hope all turned out well.
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Date: 7/31/2013 5:41:00 PM
Yes........I hope whatever differences can be healed with a smile !! I like this one !! Ps.....I'm so grateful for my placement in your Foreclosure contest.....you had some terrific entries, so this was such a compliment. Thank you, Judy !
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Date: 7/29/2013 11:06:00 AM
wow! the subtlety in a love/hate relationship, great thought. From title to last line I can't see any room for improvement!
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Date: 7/25/2013 3:05:00 PM
Didn't know you felt this way about me! LOL Loved it Judy! Big huggeroonies, xoxoxox
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:43:00 PM
you entice so gently with your plea and gentle invitation to return... this is a gem, judy!..:) huggs
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