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Trickle Down

You and I may not agree nothing to say never to see Yet I'm fulfilled within my realm When you're near I am overwhelmed Best I leave For a while Until I return Promise to smile

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 1/16/2014 8:16:00 PM

The honesty is deeply expressed in this short piece, Judy. Amazing choice of words,easy to relate to it's imagery. Enjoyable overall, Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/8/2013 9:59:00 PM

I hope all turned out well.

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/31/2013 5:41:00 PM

Yes........I hope whatever differences can be healed with a smile !! I like this one !! Ps.....I'm so grateful for my placement in your Foreclosure contest.....you had some terrific entries, so this was such a compliment. Thank you, Judy !

Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 7/29/2013 11:06:00 AM

wow! the subtlety in a love/hate relationship, great thought. From title to last line I can't see any room for improvement!

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/25/2013 3:05:00 PM

Didn't know you felt this way about me! LOL Loved it Judy! Big huggeroonies, xoxoxox

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2013 12:43:00 PM

you entice so gently with your plea and gentle invitation to return... this is a gem, judy!..:) huggs