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Awarded:  SECOND PLACE

Contest:  Funny Spooks

Sponsored by:  Carol Brown

In my armchair By the fire I drifted off to sleep Down and down and down I fell Into a well so deep While outside the shadows Of the night began to creep Along the ground Among the leaves That swirled and twirled and leaped Then - suddenly I was awakened By a rap tapping on my door And woke up so bewildered In a place I had never been before As monsters seeped Out through the cracks Across the hardwood floor I screamed and screamed Until I lost my voice - And then I Screamed some more I watched in horror From the ceiling Where from a rope I hung From a chandelier Above their jagged teeth And drooling tongues Then I saw one slither Up the stairs And through the rungs And when he finally Grabbed me I felt my last breath Leave my lungs. I saw myself Below me When the monster Threw me to the floor Where upon They all joined in To eat a feast Of human smorgasbord On legs and arms and torso They gorged and gorged and gorged Leaving just my head Insanely grinning Like a pumpkin gourd An then I heard a rap a tap A rap a tapping at the door And woke up screaming In a daze Just where I was before And through the window I could see them Behind those faces That they wore Monsters - screaming! Trick or treat It’s Halloween once more Happy Halloween! Watch out for the ghosts and goblins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 10/14/2013 2:50:00 PM
hi Elaine I love the build up a scarey and exciting pen congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/13/2013 10:54:00 PM
A scary one but, you never lost your rhyme. Congratulations. love, Joyce
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Date: 10/13/2013 8:33:00 PM
this started out so scary and ended so cute....enjoyed your poem, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/13/2013 3:23:00 AM
Wow! What an imagination you have Elaine...This sounds like a nightmare and I LOVE the ending...Congrats my friend - Tim
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:41:00 AM
Elaine.. congratulations on your win. Always & Forever =Linda=
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:08:00 AM
haha, you sure hit me good with this one... love everything about it.......... congrats..............SKAT
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Date: 10/9/2009 1:05:00 PM
Excellent and spooky, Lainie! Congratulations on your Win! Glad it was only a nightmare! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/3/2009 7:38:00 AM
a nightmare on halloween! i'd be pretty scared to, congrats on your 2nd place win!-----Ell
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Date: 10/2/2009 1:27:00 PM
Sounds scary to me. Fun too! Congratulations on your second place finish in Carol's contest. Way to go my friend. Enjoy your honor! Karen
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Date: 10/2/2009 11:59:00 AM
Hooray for you Elaine....a 2nd place winning poem!! Great job, enjoyable to read! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/2/2009 11:30:00 AM
Elaine, congratulations on 2nd place in the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2009 11:45:00 AM
Thank you dear Lainie for entering my contest. Love, Carol
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